We are writing about our experience at the Mahuika Show.
Once apon a time there were two little girls one was named Sisy and the other was Kahu Kahu was always was angry with Sisy because Sisy was very lazy but Kahu was a bosy bot kahu was Seting up camp until she saw a magic Kete she opened it her Nana froze and a flaming finger nail jumped out of the Kete he was the last flaming finger nail from Mahuika and nana froze so they took the flaming finger nail and tried to give him back. but Pokeko took him and put him on his back and took to the swamp Pokeko had a flaming beak from Mahuikas curse so Pokeko took the flaming finger nail to Mahuika when they go there Mahuika said who dears to enter my house the last time someone then she stoped and looked and she saw the flaming finger nail. so Mahuika fixed Pokekos beak and he was happy and Mahuika unfroze Nana.
Next steps
- Re read each sentence - does it make sense?
- Full stops and capital letters
- Correct your spelling errors
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